2008年1月30日水曜日

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1.0. Movie Reviews

1.1. Showcase

[+ links]

Dates on blog
(yy.mm.dd)

W

Notes

Toy Story

07.10.20

5

433

It was not easy for me to write their lines.

Kill Bill

07.10.23

5

520

It was very difficult to write this recommendation, because this movie is too violent to express the scenes. I especially do not like to write about the main character killed someone else.

Romeo and Juliet

07.11.06

4

474

The lines of Romeo and Juliet were very difficult for me to understand.

Mrs Doubtfire

07.11.20

6

448

It was very difficult to write about Daniel change Mrs. Doubtfire’s costume.

School of Rock

07.12.04

6

530

I think I can really write very well.

Lilo & Stich

07.12.18

5

804

I like this movie so I was very excited at this movie during I watched the movie.

Totals

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3209

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Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

1.2. Best Movie Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those movie reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • [I thought Lilo and Stitch is the best movie review in my movie recommend, because I really enjoy this movie.]

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2.0. Comments

Total number of comments (use dashboard)

Months

08

09

10

11

12

01

Total


0

0

2

3

1

1

7

Most comments on:

Titles of posts with link

Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)

Qualities of comments*[*]

Any one of your movie reviews

Lilo & Stich

07.12.18


When did you respond to those comments?

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07.01.30

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How did you respond to those comments?

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On my blog.

Any of your other posts*


08.01.16


When did you respond to those comments?

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08.01.25

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How did you respond to those comments?

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On my blog.

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

Final WEI

Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

  • ...Yes, it is. In a sidebar.

Additional reflections on comments

  • [it is very fun for me to respond my fiends.]

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Final WEI

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3.0. Book Reviews

Short titles
with links

Dates (yy.mm.dd)

Words

Comments

Example:

Vampire Killer

07.05.16

39

1

2-01

Aladdin and the enchanted lamp

07.10.01

127

2-02

Rip Van Winkle

07.10.04

178

2-03

The Legend of Sleepy Hollow

07.10.10

139

2-04

Zorro

07.10.27

89

2-05

Jurassic Park 3

07.11.09

137

2-06

JAWS

07.11.14

57

2-07

Jumanji

07.11.24

105

2-08

BABE

07.12.01

147

2-09

Pirate of Caribbean

07.12.05

116

2-10

Happy Christmas

07.12.09

107

2-11

Men in Black

07.12.19

75

2-12

2-13

2-14

2-15

2-16

2-17

2-18

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TOTALS:

1277

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

Final WEI

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

I think BABE is the best book review which I have written this semester, because I like this movie, and this book is very easy to read. Of course the other book reviews are also good, but I like BABE very much. I have watched this movie before and I do remember the story, so I really understood any words which I don’t know.

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Final WEI

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • ...I had never read English book since I have took this writing 3 and 4. I have read more book than before, and I can read English faster and faster. Reading book is very interesting for me. It was fun for me to visit my friends’ blog, and I was very happy when I receive some comments from my friends.

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Final WEI

6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • I really enjoy this writing 3 and 4. You should practice typing. Post a lot of diaries on your blog.

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Final WEI

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Writing IVa: Portfolio
0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words


Months

08

09

10

11

12

01

Totals

Book reviews


0

4

3

4

0

11

Blog posts


0

9

13

11

6

39

Words



1966

2218

2343

601

7128

TOTAL

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2008年1月16日水曜日

Meeting

I went to family restaurant yesterday with my friends. My friends have job. It was only me that I do not have any job except part time job. They talked about their job. They complained about their job and their colleagues. I really do not want to get a job because I thought having job is very hard and tired hearing their talk. We also talked about our memory. we talked about our pats love, school trip, fight, and a lot of memories. We also talked about our teacher. One of physical training teacher’s talks was very funny. Our school has special training during every summer vacation for big meeting of track and field. We all hate this training. We talked about it and we were excited to talk about.

Butaman


Yesterday, my mother bought some butamans. They were too cute to eat, but I ate them. My mother told me that she thought they might be not good as their looks. They were very delicious and I want to eat them again! My sister likes this food too.I went to restaurant at 6:30 to eat dinner with my friends. We talked about my memory when we were pupil. We were very happy to meet and talk with. We promised to hold party on March.

2008年1月15日火曜日

My friends

Yesterday, my friends came to my working place to eat dinner. But I was very busy to help the other customers. I really want to talk with them but I was very happy to meet them. They are my friends when I was a junior high school student. I promised to eat dinner with them today! I'm really looking forward to talk with them! My friend suggested me to have dinner next day! I am really looking forward to go there and talk with them.

2008年1月7日月曜日

Alumnae meeting

I enjoyed alumnae meeting on 6th January. I have been looking forward to take part in this party. I was very happy to meet my teachers. They were very good teacher. I talked with them about my school and last year. One of my teacher, she is English teacher, she heard about my trip to Minnesota last year. She told me lots of experiences are important for you. She is very kind and I like her very much. I wanted to talk with her as long as I can.

2008年1月5日土曜日

Coming of age ceremony

I took part in the coming of age ceremony. On 4th January, I got up at six o’clock and I and my mother went to hair salon to set up my hair. I worn Kimono, it was very tough. At 9 o’clock, I went to photo shop to have take pictures. I don’t like to be took pictures. After that, we went to the hall in Mikawa. We had never gone to the hall in Mikawa since this ceremony. I and my mother got lost, but we could get there finally. I really enjoy this ceremony because I have met my friends since the graduation. My friends were very beautiful and cool. After the ceremony we had a party. We had very good time and day.

2008年1月2日水曜日

New Year Day


On New Year day, we had snow and I made snow men. They were very small but cute. I really like to make them. My mother always tells me that I am crazy because I like snow very much and play out side without gloves. It was very cold day, and I didn’t sleep well because I pay a visit to a shrine with my friend and came back home at 2 o’clock in the morning. I was very happy to have snow on New Year day!

2007年12月27日木曜日

Clean up my room!

I cleaned up my room. I can’t clean up my room and I really hate room cleaning. My room is always messy. I did the general house cleaning on the end of the year. My mother helped me to clean up the room.

2007年12月24日月曜日

Christmas!


I went to eat cakes with Asami on Christmas day. We eat six cakes and drank coffee. They are very sweet but delicious. To tell the truth, I do not like sweeties, because they make me feel bad and after I eat them, I want to eat spicy foods. We decided to eat at least six cakes, I was very happy to eat six cakes. After we ate cakes, we went to theater to watch movie. We watched “Koizora” it was very good but very sad movie. The heroin’s boyfriend had badly cancer and dead. I couldn’t watch this movie without tears.

2007年12月22日土曜日

Christmas

I, Asami and Risa are going to see movie on the Christmas! I want to see Koizora or Kanna san. They are very nice movie I think. After that we will eat some cakes. I really looking forward to eating cakes with them.

2007年12月19日水曜日

Men in Black

I read Men in Black. This story is about aliens. They live on the earth. Men in Black have to find and watch all the aliens in the world. Kay and Edward is the best team. I like this story and Kay and Edward are very good. The pug is very cute, and he speaks. I want to see alien or work as Men in Black. I think this job is very funny but dangerous.

2007年12月18日火曜日

Lilo and Stitch


Galactic Federation headquarters Planet TURO. In the space ship, Dr. Jumba Jookiba leads scientists of Galaxy Defense Industries. He stands before the council accused of illegal genetic experimentation. He creates something looks like monster. He calls it Experiment 626, which is Stitch. Stitch has four hands and two legs. His eyes are very big and ears too. He is very cute, but his voice and behavior is not good. Stitch is bulletproof, fireproof and can think faster than super computer. He can see in the dark and move objects 3000 times his size, destroy everything he touches. Therefore the council decides to Stitch away, but Stitch is very clever, so he get away from the spaceship. He exits quadrant 17, section 0-0-5, area 51, a planet called Earth. He lands on the Hawaii. The council asks Dr. Jumba and agent Pleakley, who is an expert at the earth, to catch Stitch.
In Hawaii, Lilo swims in the sea with fishes. After that, she runs to the dance school, but she is late to the dancing lesson, so she fights another girl who is a member of the school. Lilo hits and bites her. The teacher calls Lilo’s sister to pick her up. She rushes to the school but there is not Lilo. Lilo goes home alone. Nani, Lilo’s sister, gets very angry because the social worker comes to see them to research how the family is going good. Lilo and Nani don’t have their mother and father because they died in an accident. The social worker, Mr. Bubbles, looks like very strong. After he goes back, Lilo quarrels with her sister. In the night, her sister brings some pizza for Lilo. They make it up each other. Then, a strange light glitters out side. Lilo thinks that is a falling star, but it is a spaceship which Stitch is on. Lilo wants to wish to the falling star, she wish she needs someone to be her friend who won’t run away. Nani hears this wish, so she brings her to the animal rescue to get a dog for Lilo’s friend next day. Stitch is there animal rescue because last night he was ran over by trucks. He runs away from the animal rescue, but Dr. Jumba and agent Pleakley are waiting for Stitch to catch him, so he decide to get friends with Lilo to protect his life. Lilo likes Stitch. Dr. Jumba and agent Pleakley can’t hit him.
Nani works at the restaurant. At there Dr. Jumba and agent Pleakley dress up as human. Stitch bites them and the owner gets angry about Stitch, so Nani is fired. After they get home, Nani wants to get Stitch back, but Lilo tells her he is O’hana, O’hana means family. Nani understands to live with Stitch. Next day Mr. Bubbles comes to tell Lilo to model citizen Stitch and Nani to get new job. This day, Nani is trying to get new job, but she can’t. Lilo tries to model citizen Stitch but she can’t. Lilo teaches about Elvis Presley to Stitch, but it is not going good. In the evening, David, loves Nani, come to encourage them. They surfboard. Stitch and Lilo are drawn by Dr. Jumba and agent Pleakley. Stitch can’t swim, but David saves him. Mr. Bubbles sees the scene and thinks he should take Lilo and Nani apart. Next day he would take them apart. In the night, Lilo and Nani talk each other. Stitch leaves the house at the night. He wants family.
The next day, David comes to tell Nani a new job. Nani leaves Lilo at the home alone. Stitch is pursued by Dr. Jumba and agent Pleakley, and he runs in Lilo’s house. He fights them. Lilo’s house is explored because of the fighting. Nani runs to the house, the house is burned down, but Lilo is not injured. Lilo rides on the Mr. Bubbles’ car, but she escapes. In the forest, she meets Stitch and she quarrels at Stitch. The captain Gantu is a member of the council is on the earth to catch Stitch. He catches Lilo and Stitch, but Stitch runs away. Stitch, Nani, Dr. Jumba and agent Pleakley try to take Lilo back. Stich is very powerful. They can get her back. The council comes and is going to take Stitch, but Lilo claim the right to live with Stitch. They allow Stitch to live the earth. Lilo, Stitch, and Nani live happily.
This movie is very good. I like this movie because this movie is good to watch with family. Stitch is bad and strong, but he is very cute. My mother and friends love him very much, always they see him without saying he is very pretty with big smile. I really understand the feeling. Stitch is a new Disney hero.