2008年1月30日水曜日

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1.0. Movie Reviews

1.1. Showcase

[+ links]

Dates on blog
(yy.mm.dd)

W

Notes

Toy Story

07.10.20

5

433

It was not easy for me to write their lines.

Kill Bill

07.10.23

5

520

It was very difficult to write this recommendation, because this movie is too violent to express the scenes. I especially do not like to write about the main character killed someone else.

Romeo and Juliet

07.11.06

4

474

The lines of Romeo and Juliet were very difficult for me to understand.

Mrs Doubtfire

07.11.20

6

448

It was very difficult to write about Daniel change Mrs. Doubtfire’s costume.

School of Rock

07.12.04

6

530

I think I can really write very well.

Lilo & Stich

07.12.18

5

804

I like this movie so I was very excited at this movie during I watched the movie.

Totals

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3209

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Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

1.2. Best Movie Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those movie reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • [I thought Lilo and Stitch is the best movie review in my movie recommend, because I really enjoy this movie.]

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2.0. Comments

Total number of comments (use dashboard)

Months

08

09

10

11

12

01

Total


0

0

2

3

1

1

7

Most comments on:

Titles of posts with link

Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)

Qualities of comments*[*]

Any one of your movie reviews

Lilo & Stich

07.12.18


When did you respond to those comments?

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07.01.30

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How did you respond to those comments?

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On my blog.

Any of your other posts*


08.01.16


When did you respond to those comments?

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08.01.25

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How did you respond to those comments?

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On my blog.

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

Final WEI

Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

  • ...Yes, it is. In a sidebar.

Additional reflections on comments

  • [it is very fun for me to respond my fiends.]

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Final WEI

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3.0. Book Reviews

Short titles
with links

Dates (yy.mm.dd)

Words

Comments

Example:

Vampire Killer

07.05.16

39

1

2-01

Aladdin and the enchanted lamp

07.10.01

127

2-02

Rip Van Winkle

07.10.04

178

2-03

The Legend of Sleepy Hollow

07.10.10

139

2-04

Zorro

07.10.27

89

2-05

Jurassic Park 3

07.11.09

137

2-06

JAWS

07.11.14

57

2-07

Jumanji

07.11.24

105

2-08

BABE

07.12.01

147

2-09

Pirate of Caribbean

07.12.05

116

2-10

Happy Christmas

07.12.09

107

2-11

Men in Black

07.12.19

75

2-12

2-13

2-14

2-15

2-16

2-17

2-18

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TOTALS:

1277

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

Final WEI

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

I think BABE is the best book review which I have written this semester, because I like this movie, and this book is very easy to read. Of course the other book reviews are also good, but I like BABE very much. I have watched this movie before and I do remember the story, so I really understood any words which I don’t know.

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Final WEI

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • ...I had never read English book since I have took this writing 3 and 4. I have read more book than before, and I can read English faster and faster. Reading book is very interesting for me. It was fun for me to visit my friends’ blog, and I was very happy when I receive some comments from my friends.

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Final WEI

6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • I really enjoy this writing 3 and 4. You should practice typing. Post a lot of diaries on your blog.

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Final WEI

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Writing IVa: Portfolio
0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words


Months

08

09

10

11

12

01

Totals

Book reviews


0

4

3

4

0

11

Blog posts


0

9

13

11

6

39

Words



1966

2218

2343

601

7128

TOTAL

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2008年1月16日水曜日

Meeting

I went to family restaurant yesterday with my friends. My friends have job. It was only me that I do not have any job except part time job. They talked about their job. They complained about their job and their colleagues. I really do not want to get a job because I thought having job is very hard and tired hearing their talk. We also talked about our memory. we talked about our pats love, school trip, fight, and a lot of memories. We also talked about our teacher. One of physical training teacher’s talks was very funny. Our school has special training during every summer vacation for big meeting of track and field. We all hate this training. We talked about it and we were excited to talk about.

Butaman


Yesterday, my mother bought some butamans. They were too cute to eat, but I ate them. My mother told me that she thought they might be not good as their looks. They were very delicious and I want to eat them again! My sister likes this food too.I went to restaurant at 6:30 to eat dinner with my friends. We talked about my memory when we were pupil. We were very happy to meet and talk with. We promised to hold party on March.

2008年1月15日火曜日

My friends

Yesterday, my friends came to my working place to eat dinner. But I was very busy to help the other customers. I really want to talk with them but I was very happy to meet them. They are my friends when I was a junior high school student. I promised to eat dinner with them today! I'm really looking forward to talk with them! My friend suggested me to have dinner next day! I am really looking forward to go there and talk with them.

2008年1月7日月曜日

Alumnae meeting

I enjoyed alumnae meeting on 6th January. I have been looking forward to take part in this party. I was very happy to meet my teachers. They were very good teacher. I talked with them about my school and last year. One of my teacher, she is English teacher, she heard about my trip to Minnesota last year. She told me lots of experiences are important for you. She is very kind and I like her very much. I wanted to talk with her as long as I can.

2008年1月5日土曜日

Coming of age ceremony

I took part in the coming of age ceremony. On 4th January, I got up at six o’clock and I and my mother went to hair salon to set up my hair. I worn Kimono, it was very tough. At 9 o’clock, I went to photo shop to have take pictures. I don’t like to be took pictures. After that, we went to the hall in Mikawa. We had never gone to the hall in Mikawa since this ceremony. I and my mother got lost, but we could get there finally. I really enjoy this ceremony because I have met my friends since the graduation. My friends were very beautiful and cool. After the ceremony we had a party. We had very good time and day.

2008年1月2日水曜日

New Year Day


On New Year day, we had snow and I made snow men. They were very small but cute. I really like to make them. My mother always tells me that I am crazy because I like snow very much and play out side without gloves. It was very cold day, and I didn’t sleep well because I pay a visit to a shrine with my friend and came back home at 2 o’clock in the morning. I was very happy to have snow on New Year day!